The post from third quarter that I would like you to read is the first one about Leonel Castillo and C.P. Ellis. I would like you to read this post because I found both of their stories very interesting because of their different points of view. For example, Castillo's views on immigration were interesting as he was a man who was an immigrant himself but who also had experience as the director of the United States Immigration and Naturalization Service. Castillo's history made his point of view on immigration unique and different from most other peoples'. Also the story about C.P. Ellis was interesting because it was from the viewpoint of someone who was at one point a klansman, which was new to me. I found both of these passages strikingly and feel I true feeling in my responses which is why I would like you to grade them.
The post from fourth quarter that I would like you to read is the one about Jack Culberg and Larry Heinemann. When writing about Larry Heinemann I felt passionate about my writing because I find the stories of war veterans interesting. I felt that my passion towards his story caused me to write well which is why I would like you to grade that entry. The other part of that entry was about Jack Culberg. I thought that what Jack Culberg wrote after being a wealthy businessman and CEO was interesting because he at times almost seemed to put down the wealthier people and CEO's in America. I thought he made interesting points and as a result I was able to blog passionately about him as well.
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